To get a wider range of opinions on our thriller opening i decided to ask my family members.
Both of my parents are 47, and the advantage of asking their views was I was able to gain positive feedback and constructive criticism from an older age group. They thought :
-The plot was original.
-The car driving down the country lane at night made you anticipate what would happen next.
-Seeing the blind man from the antagonists point of view added suspense.
-To improve the opening it would be effective if the audience were able to see the antagonist and blind man in a clip together, to emphasise the danger the blind man is in.
I also asked my 21 year old brother, he thought:
-The nursery rhyme was effective, and that it made the antagonists obsession more twisted.
-Seeing the knife being sharpened made the storyline more menacing.
-To improve the opening there should more shots of the blind man.
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